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looking good

First part feels like a loading screen. (I was trying to click the apple)

Advice: I think some special effects like blurring can suck up performance.
You could use an image editing program to make the blurs and save them as png/gif images. ("Paintdotnet" is the name of the prog )
you can also screen capture the backgrounds and use the images instead.
If you are really strapped for performance. (FSCapture can do scrolling screen caps)

Looking forward to the next one

+ The movie was drawn and understandable.
? The intro slide show was hard to understand.

+ Quantity: It was a long move.
? Most submissions have credits that are as long as the movie. But yours is around 7 min, so I wouldn't mind having them 30secs long.

- Most of it didn't have a background.

Jakest123 responds:

it didn't really have a background because they're in the core of the universe, which you will understand if you watch the other episodes on www.dwojac.webs.com/tex , and you will also understand the opening slideshow (it's pretty much just a recap)

I enjoyed it!

+ Visual script
++ Drawn with sprite like action.
+ Sound quality and appropriation.
+ Original characters
++ I laughed when I saw the green blob sprout muscles.

Action was missed, but not needed

+ Step sys
+ Lines of dialog was brief enough to not need the steps.
+ Dialog was smooth and believable,
- but name-dropping: FFD at the end irritated me a little.
- Some levels originality where lost using other characters.
- I felt the BG music was a little to loud to be background,
+ but the music didn't have lyrics to distract.
- not much happened

So true.

Dialog sys was nice and readable.
But the 'jpegged' background is noticeable.
The action was smooth too.

light conversation

+ drawn
- depressive guy is hard to hear
+ pun
- but the pun really didn't land for me.

Border'n crunk

+ drawn and cognitive (looks good)
+ sounds good
- no complaints really, but it felt a little slow.
+7 other

? (Personally I would take the word epic out of the ending)

ExploadingRabbits responds:

well actual the word epic is in their because of another flash animation i did a while ago that ended with robotnik on the floor like in this one and i just said fail but i didn't upload it here because i don't think its good enough to pass judgment this one is like a sequel to that one.

quick and crisp

+ I watched it 9 times;
+ crisp sprites;
- sprite originality;
+ physics;
+ timing;
+ sound;

I C what u did there

You should animate more dreams, that are less (boring?) unprofitable.
like alleged pro[hicies.
Pretty good 4 flash4.

GOOD

I don't know why I'm obsessing over motions recently,
but that's what would've boosted it 1 vital star 4 me.

I love twist endings, double meanings, symbolism, and innuendos. Each submission is a result of new codes and techniques i have learned, and they teach me something about myself too.

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