The first MSPaint animation to make me laugh.
+ the video game music sound effects gave it the right mood
+ good voice acting
++ Made me laugh
-no controls to pause, etc
lol thanks a lot dude! I dunno how to work Adobe Flash yet. I'm learning it for my next video. I promise it'll have it.
+/- A for EffArt: expression. Not as accurate as Divinchi, but says more than a mimic of reality would.
+ Sound quality
- zoom mechanic seems broken
-/+ Hard to sit through (personal preference)
thks EK515 for ur opinion :)
While the Art and Concept was "cliche";
I really enjoyed your directing.
Thank you for giving an HONEST review unlike the three 0's below me.
+ Facial detail\emotion
+ (I forgot the word): I cringed when the Huge puzzle was being disturbed, because it was clear there was a lot of effort put into it.
+ Clear voice acting, sound effects and BGM didn't distract from the movie.
+ Style, & non distracting background.
? The guy says the puzzle is 'All human knowledge" but doesn't human knowledge change?
? Are you thinking about updating the logo?
You should make ms-paint stick-figure comics instead of this.
I'd find those more interesting and original.
Cute moment, but not much of a punch line
+ I has nice depth and facial detail.
? The gradients on the red badnik seems to contrast too much:
You have (Red to black), instead of (red to darker red).
i know, i really should ave taken more time with it but i was so exited to get in the sonic shorts collab i rushed it, i have another one about badnicks and there daily life, but i may never get that one done since the files were corrupted
+ Attention to detail
+ hidden cameo
+ Artwork looked pretty good.
- There was an expectation to hear wings flapping since the 'camera' was so close to the bird.
Minor tweaks i would suggest (not important enough to lose points):
? I would tint the mountain into the sky and shade the background items; for depth.
? The perspecive of the cabin seemed 'exaggerated'. (vanish-points too close?)
*smacks head* whops. I tinted some of the trees slightly but I definitely forgot the mts. The look of the cabin (everything really) is experimental. I'll eventually work out a style of how I want to animate. Thanks for the helpful review. :)
"press space to advance"
+ appropriate sound (but bgm lyrics are annoying)
+ customized sprites
? Since the movie coming up seems to be so story heavy; I'll be watching for an "oh snap" moment. That is when something happens in the movie that is significant enough to be referenced later on in the series. A death, confession of love, or a paradigm shift for example.
Nice and simple
You should make this into a .gif too.
There isn't much else to say about it:
+ style of colour
+ cognitive artwork
Thanks! I was thinking about making it into a gif. Any recommendations for what to do with it once I have a gif?
Best Claymation I've seen here.
+ The character and props were recognizable and looked well.
& the events were easy to follow. (it's a gator going fishing; it doesn't need a 'plot')
- The goofy sound effects had too much focus.
It needs other sounds and/or music especially with the last gag at the end.
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