I like it
+ smooth frame by frame
++ Exaggerated lip syncing
- short and uneventful. (not much else to say about it)
I like it
+ smooth frame by frame
++ Exaggerated lip syncing
- short and uneventful. (not much else to say about it)
Thanks for the review, much appreciated. ^_^
So well put together, it was like watching TV
+ Seems to have a plot & storyboard.
+ Sound effects & bg sounds
+ Cognative art
lol Thank you! I don't know why they call this review useless, but the TV thing is my main point in the animation.
Most of my insperation comes from Samurai Jack, not the art style but the character.
pretty original
+ I haven't seen something like this, in recent memory.
- the 'special effects' were just a paint-brush tool.
- The fight was too short. The stick figure was a push-over.
Well, we only recorded, like, 30 seconds of video. this whole thing was done in about 10 minutes
Suspenseful ending
+ Good action, expression, and title-screen.
- A peeve I have is with originality. It reminds me of SuperMarioBrosZ, and that brings comparisons you probably will not want.
+ It feels nicely polished.
- (missed a spot)
A lot of the images are "jpegged". Using "lossless png/gif" when publishing the file should get rid of the "jpegginess" in your movies.
thanks for the criticism i'll assure you it wont go to waste :)
Looking forward to the next one
+ The movie was drawn and understandable.
? The intro slide show was hard to understand.
+ Quantity: It was a long move.
? Most submissions have credits that are as long as the movie. But yours is around 7 min, so I wouldn't mind having them 30secs long.
- Most of it didn't have a background.
it didn't really have a background because they're in the core of the universe, which you will understand if you watch the other episodes on www.dwojac.webs.com/tex , and you will also understand the opening slideshow (it's pretty much just a recap)
Border'n crunk
+ drawn and cognitive (looks good)
+ sounds good
- no complaints really, but it felt a little slow.
+7 other
? (Personally I would take the word epic out of the ending)
well actual the word epic is in their because of another flash animation i did a while ago that ended with robotnik on the floor like in this one and i just said fail but i didn't upload it here because i don't think its good enough to pass judgment this one is like a sequel to that one.
good concept terrible execution
didn't you read the rules? no crappy 2 second previews!
the yell volume over the music's.
the slow mundane axe throw. It's gonna get blammed sry.
well it didn't get blammed so there :P and i'm gonna use a higher frame rate in the series so things should be faster and the sound sync should be better
meh....
I find the real game deaths more entertaining than some of these.
maybe you could make a unfair game? eh, eh?
Really? Show me some.
I love twist endings, double meanings, symbolism, and innuendos. Each submission is a result of new codes and techniques i have learned, and they teach me something about myself too.
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